本身多益960，程度很不錯的 Susanna, 因為考試在即，透過作文批改找出自身的問題，一戰就考到理想分數 L: 9, R: 8.5, S: 7.5, W: 6.5, Overall: 8 !!
大家可能好奇這L&R幾乎滿分的神人，作文會有甚麼問題?
簡單來說，Rossi 協助過很多本身英語程度已經很好的學生，他們比較共同的問題就是寫作時的用字或句子會太過口語化 (colloquial expressions)。因為平常就能自然使用英語，有時在論點表述上反而會出現組織比較鬆散的狀況。
以這篇Cambridge 14 的題目: Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Susanna 在某段裡的句子: Another reason is that some people dream of becoming entrepreneurs. They wish to fulfill their goals and work according to their own ways. In this case, it’s definitely better to be self-employed.口語上沒有問題，但寫作上如果能改成:
Another reason is that some people dream of becoming entrepreneurs. In this case, to be self-employed, which allows people to set attainable goals and achieve them in the utmost comfort, would be an optimal solution. 在寫作裡不僅可以用上難度比較高的複雜句型，文字表達上也更精煉。我們的批改不只單純改文法錯字，也包含句型與論點的refine，但因為沒有線上講解，批改服務適合已經有一定程度的學生，需要我們的幫忙都歡迎來信或私訊。
我們的email: rossilee9@gmail.com
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