2/27 的 #IELTSwritingTask2 寫作題目蠻有趣的 :
✅ Good managers should be warm and friendly toward their staff. Do you agree or disagree?
這類生活化的議題以往出現頻率不高,或是有些同學們還沒進入職場,所以可能在想論點上會遇到困難。
Rossi 提供一些想法讓同學們參考 🙂
全文如下:

Management has long been considered an imperative pattern that improves work performance. It is therefore suggested by some that those who hold managerial positions should treat their fellow staff amiably. I personally agree with this view.

Being friendly toward employees might be problematic. Firstly, friendliness might blur the boundary between managers and the fellow workers, which might further lead to ineffective management and poor supervision. In the long run, administrators might fail to point out and correct employee misbehaviour such as tardiness. Also, concerned about the workplace harmony and friendship, employees might not directly report problems to the manager. Accumulation of these errors will form a vicious circle that weakens the productivity of employees and the competitiveness of a company.

However, in most cases, treating employees in a friendly manner is appreciated. Behaving in a pleasant way toward their fellow workers, kind managers can boost office morale. A welcoming atmosphere directly boosts work performance. Secondly, kind supervisors reduce employee anxiety. Feeling stable in their career, workers might be more willing to fully dedicate themselves to their jobs. Once the commitment is made, employee loyalty will be built, and the growth and wellbeing of a company can be well expected. Thus, Kindness in managers is a precondition for building a flourishing company.      

To conclude, despite concerns of ineffective management, poor supervision and wrong decisions, leading the team in a friendly way is the crucial element to business success. An affable manager creates a harmonious atmosphere in the office, makes staff more productive but less anxious, and facilitates business growth. 
 
不需要寫很多贅字,不需要用超級難字,只要清楚表述立場並延伸論點就可以寫好一篇作文!!
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