專業線上雅思教學 Rossi IELTS

原句: in recent years, it also has become common and popular for citizens to concern about some internal function such as security and automation. 

新句: the internal function in terms of security and building automation has received more attention than before.

<< 把 citizen 藏起來，把 such as 換成 in terms of >>

原句: I think that these people may ignore that they need to spend an enormous amount of money to invite notable artists and architects to design the building. 

新句: an enormous amount of money, spent on appearance design and regular maintenance, is often ignored.

<< 一樣是把 I 藏起來，再用簡單的 "同位語" 概念，你也可以寫出漂亮的補述句型!! >>

很多時候句子裡要強調的並不是 "Doer" 做動作的人 e.g. I, people, citizen...等等; 重點反而是後面的 "Receiver" ，這時候就可以善用被動句，請記住 - "被動句沒有比較正式或學

術!! "，只是句子的重點不同而已。但不要刻意每一句都這樣寫，自然就好